After seeing a first version of my biography, I asked for "more insight."
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I grew up in rural Iowa. I was raised on a farm, which was about a mile from a very small town with only 1,000 people. I was born in 1958. I was a somewhat shy and awkward child, but I was very interesting in learning and especially science. But I also liked foreign languages and history. In college, I majored in biology and was pre-med. I became uncertain about applying to medical school, but one year after college, I did apply. I matriculated in an MD-PhD program. Later, at age 40, I got an MBA. After that, I worked in strategy consulting for the biotech industry. Please write a biographical essay about me. My name is Bruce.
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Growing up in rural Iowa, Bruce was raised on a farm just a mile from a small town with a population of only 1,000. Born in 1958, Bruce was a shy and awkward child but had a strong interest in learning, particularly in the fields of science, foreign languages, and history.
After completing high school, Bruce attended college where he majored in biology and was pre-med. However, after graduation, Bruce became uncertain about applying to medical school. Nevertheless, one year after college, Bruce decided to pursue an MD-PhD program.
At the age of 40, Bruce decided to further his education by obtaining an MBA. With this new qualification, Bruce went on to work in strategy consulting for the biotech industry. With a background in science and medicine, as well as business, Bruce brought a unique set of skills and perspective to his consulting work.
Throughout his career, Bruce has remained committed to learning and expanding his knowledge. He has used his education and experiences to make a meaningful impact in the biotech industry. Bruce is a highly motivated individual with a passion for science and medicine, as well as business and strategy. He is a valuable asset to any organization in the biotech industry.
I noted it had "Some insight" in V1, that was interesting, so I asked it simply for "more insights" in V2.
Thank you, but please rewrite it with more insights.
VERSION TWO
Growing up in rural Iowa, Bruce was raised on a farm just a mile from a small town with a population of only 1,000. Born in 1958, Bruce was a shy and awkward child but had a strong interest in learning, particularly in the fields of science, foreign languages, and history. His upbringing in a rural area and early exposure to farming, instilled in him a deep respect for the natural world, and a drive to understand it through scientific inquiry.
After completing high school, Bruce attended college where he majored in biology and was pre-med. However, after graduation, Bruce became uncertain about applying to medical school. Nevertheless, one year after college, Bruce decided to pursue an MD-PhD program. This decision was a reflection of his innate desire to not only understand the inner workings of the human body, but to use this knowledge to help others through the practice of medicine.
At the age of 40, Bruce decided to further his education by obtaining an MBA. This decision was not just an academic pursuit, but also an effort to gain a deeper understanding of the business of healthcare and biotech. With this new qualification, Bruce went on to work in strategy consulting for the biotech industry. With a background in science and medicine, as well as business, Bruce brought a unique set of skills and perspective to his consulting work. He was able to use his broad understanding of the healthcare industry to help biotech companies develop and execute strategies that would benefit not just their bottom line, but also patients and healthcare providers.
Throughout his career, Bruce has remained committed to learning and expanding his knowledge. He has used his education and experiences to make a meaningful impact in the biotech industry. Bruce is a highly motivated individual with a passion for science and medicine, as well as business and strategy. He is deeply committed to using his skills and knowledge to make a positive difference in the world. He is a valuable asset to any organization in the biotech industry, and his impact will be felt for many years to come.
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