Wednesday, May 21, 2025

AI: Comparing IT CAN'T HAPPEN HERE, Other Settings [Our Town], More Variations

 Discuss and compare Lewis’s IT CANT HAPPEN HERE and Ionescu’s RHINOCEROS. As a sidebar, compare THE CRUCIBLE.


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Sinclair Lewis’s It Can’t Happen Here (1935) and Eugène Ionesco’s Rhinoceros (1959) are separated by genre, geography, and era—but share an urgent warning about mass conformity and the rise of authoritarianism. Both works dramatize how ordinary citizens capitulate to dangerous ideologies, and both center around lone individuals who resist, though at great personal cost.


Main Comparison: Lewis vs. Ionesco

1. Historical and Political Context

  • Lewis’s It Can’t Happen Here was written during the rise of fascism in Europe and directly critiques American complacency. His fictional dictator, Buzz Windrip, is a populist who promises economic revival and law and order, then installs a totalitarian regime. The novel is a cautionary tale for 1930s America, implicitly asking: could fascism take root in a democracy?

  • Ionesco’s Rhinoceros, emerging from post-WWII existentialism and the playwright’s firsthand experience of fascism in Romania, explores ideological conformity through absurdist theater. People literally turn into rhinoceroses—an allegory for becoming fascists or communists or mob-thinkers. It’s an abstract, stylized portrayal of how people rationalize surrendering their humanity.

2. Tone and Genre

  • Lewis writes a political satire with journalistic realism—his characters are recognizable, his settings plausible. The protagonist, Doremus Jessup, is a Vermont newspaperman watching his country slip into dictatorship. Lewis uses conventional narrative to mirror contemporary political events.

  • Ionesco’s theater of the absurd upends realism. His characters don’t behave logically; transformations are surreal and unacknowledged. The power of Rhinoceros is its emotional uncanniness: people turning into brutes is never explained, yet everyone accepts it—mirroring how societies normalize repression.

3. Theme of Resistance

  • In It Can’t Happen Here, resistance is political and organized (though eventually crushed). Doremus joins a resistance network, publishes underground news, and suffers for it. It is an active resistance based on liberal values.

  • In Rhinoceros, resistance is existential and solitary. Bérenger, a passive drunkard, ends as the only human left. His refusal to become a rhinoceros isn’t heroic in any grand way—it's tragic, desperate, and possibly futile. Ionesco is less confident in collective political salvation.

4. The Mechanism of Conformity

  • Lewis shows how institutions—media, courts, police—are co-opted by power. The descent is systemic.

  • Ionesco depicts conformity as psychological contagion: people desire to be like others, to belong—even if it means surrendering reason and morality. It’s almost metaphysical.


Sidebar: Arthur Miller’s The Crucible

The Crucible (1953), though set in 1692 Salem, was written as an allegory for McCarthyism. Like It Can’t Happen Here and Rhinoceros, it dramatizes how fear and hysteria can dismantle truth and justice.

Similarities:

  • All three center around a lone or minority voice resisting societal madness: Doremus Jessup (Lewis), Bérenger (Ionesco), and John Proctor (Miller).

  • They expose how ideology weaponizes institutions—whether through show trials (Miller), state propaganda (Lewis), or mass peer pressure (Ionesco).

  • The texts are warnings, not just about totalitarianism, but about the everyday mechanisms of complicity—cowardice, denial, self-interest.

Differences:

  • The Crucible is more focused on morality and individual guilt; it’s rooted in American Puritanism and personal conscience.

  • Lewis critiques populist politics and American exceptionalism.

  • Ionesco's lens is broader and bleaker—focused on the absurdity of existence and ideological madness as a universal condition.


Final Note

Together, these works form a chilling trifecta:

  • Lewis warns us how tyranny can begin with good intentions.

  • Ionesco shows us how people convince themselves it's desirable.

  • Miller reminds us how people let it happen to others first.

They remain, sadly, timeless.


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Write a treatment for a Netflix mini series proposal for a new composite work which merges themes from all 3, while not simply being an assemblage or pastiche, but being a new work.


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Title: THE TURNING

Format:
6-episode limited series
Genre: Political Thriller / Absurdist Drama / Historical Allegory
Tone: Dark, satirical, hauntingly surreal


LOGLINE

In a small American town on the eve of a national election, a bizarre ideological epidemic begins turning citizens into mute, gray-skinned creatures with glazed eyes and rhythmic, stomping gaits. As institutions fall and neighbors vanish, a reluctant journalist, a disillusioned schoolteacher, and a traumatized war veteran must confront a mounting tide of compliance and fear, struggling to retain their identity and integrity as the nation “turns.”


THEMATIC INSPIRATION & INTEGRATION

THE TURNING is not a remake or collage of It Can’t Happen Here, Rhinoceros, and The Crucible—it is a new narrative that extracts their core themes:

  • From Lewis: the slow, normalized rise of American authoritarianism under populist pretense

  • From Ionesco: the surreal, existential dread of watching everyone around you succumb to an idea made flesh

  • From Miller: the guilt, repression, and moral absolutism that justify cruelty in the name of collective purity

These elements are transmuted into a hybrid story about ideological contagion, personal conscience, and the eerie ways societies decompose under pressure—without the need for a single villain or coherent doctrine.


STORY WORLD

Set in a fictional swing-state town in near-future America, where a new political movement called The Threshold promises unity, dignity, and renewal after a national crisis (climate shocks, economic collapse, and cyberwarfare are hinted at, not detailed). Their slogans are vague but emotionally potent. Their gatherings are growing. Their rituals seem harmless. Until… they aren’t.

Rather than literal rhinos, citizens begin to “turn” into ideologically blank figures: pale, rhythmic, robotic people who begin purging books, repeating fragments of slogans, or reporting "non-compliant" behavior. Their eyes are dull. They move in step. They forget their children. They hum.

No one talks about it directly.

The police, churches, and news begin adapting to the new reality. Eventually, they serve it.


CORE CHARACTERS

  • Miles Wren – 52, local newspaper editor, sarcastic and cautious. A one-time progressive who gave up caring. When the new mayor is elected and town rules change overnight, he’s slow to act—until his daughter starts “turning.” A modern Doremus Jessup.

  • Clara Vale – 34, high school teacher, dismissed for refusing to teach the new “Civic Renewal” curriculum. A former believer in the system, she becomes the show's conscience and the character closest in spirit to John Proctor—wracked with self-doubt, but brave.

  • Joaquín “Joey” Ramos – 40, a PTSD-stricken ex-Marine turned librarian. Haunted by his role in prior conflicts, he recognizes the rhythm of fascism early. He creates an underground sanctuary of banned books, art, and memory.

  • Mayor Halden – Charismatic leader and former pastor. Never seen “turning” but is always surrounded by “turned” citizens. He speaks like a cross between a televangelist and an AI-generated ad for dignity.

  • The Archivist – A mysterious figure who collects the stories of those who resisted or disappeared. Possibly unreliable, possibly not human.


EPISODE GUIDE

Ep 1: “The Threshold”
A funeral, a campaign rally, and a school firing. Small, strange changes. Clara begins to ask questions. Miles makes a dark joke that doesn’t land.

Ep 2: “Eyes Like Glass”
Clara’s neighbor begins walking in slow, silent circles at night. Students stop answering questions. Miles’s daughter repeats slogans in her sleep.

Ep 3: “Compliance Protocol”
City Hall mandates new dress codes, rituals. Joey is detained after giving students unapproved books. A “non-conforming” family disappears.

Ep 4: “The Sanctum”
The three resisters find each other. An underground archive is formed. But paranoia grows—is one of them already turning?

Ep 5: “The Bonfire”
Public burning of books, art, violins, old clothes. Mayor Halden declares that “The Turning” is complete. But Miles’s daughter briefly awakens and whispers: “It isn’t.”

Ep 6: “The Quiet Day”
Final resistance. A last broadcast. One character chooses to turn. One is executed. One escapes—but perhaps only into memory. The show ends with schoolchildren practicing chants as the town fades into gray.


STYLE & AESTHETIC

  • Visual tone: muted colors that slowly drain from the palette across episodes. Influence from The Leftovers, Black Mirror, and The Handmaid’s Tale.

  • Surreal elements creep in slowly—repetition, visual symmetry, uncanny movement—blurring realism and dreamlike dread.

  • Dialog: sharp, ironic, and often clipped. Some scenes unfold with theatrical minimalism—long silences, sudden shouting, surreal monologues.


WHY THIS NOW?

THE TURNING is timely without being didactic. It speaks to political fatigue, moral uncertainty, and the eerie ways that compliance now wears a mask of empathy. Rather than preach, the series watches—quietly, horrified—while good people do nothing, and nothing slowly becomes everything.


Optional Tie-In: An accompanying short documentary or podcast miniseries exploring the source inspirations—Sinclair Lewis, Ionesco, Miller—and the real-world histories that informed them.

Would you like a mock-up cover image for the pitch deck?



The gray figures taking over the townspeople remind me of INVASION OF THE BODY SNATCHERS.


Exactly—and that’s an intentional resonance worth building on. Like Invasion of the Body Snatchers, The Turning taps into the dread of identity erasure and social conformity masquerading as peace. In both stories, the horror isn’t violence but the quiet replacement of selfhood: neighbors still look like themselves but feel subtly “off,” until eventually they no longer remember—or care—who they were.

However, The Turning departs by emphasizing political ritual and the slow bureaucratic reordering of society, drawing more from It Can’t Happen Here and The Crucible. Where Body Snatchers leans into sci-fi paranoia, The Turning grounds its dread in ideological atmosphere and institutional transformation, not alien spores.

Would you like me to write a short teaser monologue for the series trailer, in that eerie tone?

Go back to the themes you mentioned at the beginning of your essay, isolationist versus antifascist, populist versus liberal. Or any other words welcome comparisons.

Excellent. Let’s revisit It Can’t Happen Here through the lens of key ideological tensions of the late 1930s—isolationist vs. anti-fascist, populist vs. liberal, individualist vs. collectivist, and even mass media vs. civic truth. These tensions help us understand the deeper stakes of Lewis’s novel and how different factions of American society would have interpreted it.


1. Isolationist vs. Anti-Fascist

  • In the late 1930s, American isolationism was strong, especially among Republicans and some Southern Democrats. The horrors of WWI and the Great Depression had left many Americans opposed to foreign entanglements. It Can’t Happen Here subtly pushes back against this mindset by arguing that fascism isn’t just “over there.” It’s already germinating in America.

  • Anti-fascist intellectuals, New Deal liberals, and some union leaders read the novel as a call to vigilance—not just abroad, but at home. Lewis’s critique of the American press’s cowardice and the public’s political apathy echoed the warnings of those who feared that America was too passive about fascist developments in Germany and Italy.


2. Populist vs. Liberal

  • Buzz Windrip is clearly modeled on Huey Long, whose populism threatened to outflank FDR on the left with programs like “Share Our Wealth.” Windrip campaigns on economic justice, American greatness, and moral restoration—but quickly descends into dictatorship.

  • Lewis critiques populism as a tool of manipulation, showing how easily it slides into demagoguery. In contrast, the novel valorizes liberalism—rule of law, reason, press freedom, and gradual reform—as fragile but vital. The liberal hero, Doremus Jessup, is flawed but principled—a man of the Enlightenment trying to survive in a time of mass hysteria.

  • In this framing, populism = emotional appeal and mob energy, while liberalism = skeptical thought and institutional guardrails.


3. Individual vs. Collective Conformity

  • The novel underscores the erosion of individuality under totalitarian rule. Those who resist Windrip’s regime are isolated, exiled, or killed. Most citizens adapt—not out of belief, but fatigue.

  • This reflects a broader tension between American individualism and the collectivist pressures of mass politics. Lewis suggests that without active civic engagement, individualism becomes passive and powerless, easily overridden by slogans and spectacle.


4. Mass Media vs. Civic Truth

  • Lewis devotes considerable attention to the press—its cowardice, its vulnerability to corporate and political pressure, and its role in legitimizing Windrip.

  • In the 1930s, radio and newspapers were already reshaping public discourse. Lewis anticipates how mass media can become a tool of propaganda, erasing the line between news and ideology. This fear was very real to Roosevelt’s critics and supporters alike.


5. “American Exceptionalism” vs. Historical Paranoia

  • The title itself—It Can’t Happen Here—is the ultimate irony. Lewis attacks the myth of American exceptionalism, the idea that the U.S. is uniquely immune to authoritarianism.

  • Republicans and Democrats alike often clung to that belief. But Lewis punctures it, warning that our very complacency is the danger. His point: America’s Constitution won’t save us if its people stop defending its spirit.


Conclusion: Then and Now

These tensions—populist charisma vs. democratic institutions, isolation vs. engagement, media spectacle vs. civic truth—are not just 1930s concerns. They have cycled through American history repeatedly. Lewis saw his time clearly—and by framing these fault lines so starkly, he gave future generations a framework to recognize when “it” might be happening again.


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Given those existing political dynamics....

Constructing a detailed, rational counterfactual, how might world events of the late 1930s played out differently if HUEY LONG  had been elected president of the United States in 1936?

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Fascinating. Let’s construct a detailed, rational counterfactual history in which Huey Long is elected President in 1936, defeating Franklin Roosevelt. To ground this, we’ll assume:

  • Long survives his 1935 assassination attempt, wins national traction with his “Share Our Wealth” platform.

  • He capitalizes on Depression fatigue and populist momentum to win the presidency—perhaps with support from poor Southern whites, disaffected urban workers, and anti-FDR populists.

This counterfactual envisions a democratic election of an authoritarian-leaning populist, leading to a radically different trajectory for U.S. domestic and foreign policy in the crucial years before WWII.


I. DOMESTIC POLICY

1. Massive Redistribution Programs

Long’s “Share Our Wealth” plan promised:

  • Guaranteed income ($2,500/year minimum)

  • Free education and pensions

  • Heavy wealth taxes on corporations and millionaires

Counterfactual effect:

  • Class warfare escalates: Wall Street panics. Capital flight occurs. Conservative Democrats and Republicans in Congress resist.

  • Inflationary spending and political instability become dominant themes of 1937–1938.

  • Economic growth might spike briefly (from redistribution), but long-term confidence in the U.S. economy deteriorates.

2. Weakening of Democratic Institutions

  • Long showed open contempt for checks and balances in Louisiana, using state troopers, loyalty oaths, and purges.

  • As president, he likely undermines the judiciary, centralizes power in the executive, and uses patronage and propaganda to expand control.

  • Press freedom suffers. Long sues newspapers, arrests critics, and builds a “Voice of the People” radio propaganda machine.

Counterfactual effect:

  • The U.S. drifts toward soft authoritarianism—still holding elections, but with declining institutional integrity.

  • Civil liberties erode. Critics may be surveilled or prosecuted. Labor and civil rights groups split—some co-opted, others crushed.


II. FOREIGN POLICY

3. Strong Isolationism

  • Long was vehemently anti-war and anti-British aristocracy.

  • He believed U.S. troops fought “Wall Street’s wars” and had little sympathy for Europe’s power struggles.

Counterfactual effect:

  • No early rearmament program.

  • No Lend-Lease.

  • No effective opposition to Hitler, Mussolini, or Japan in the late 1930s.

4. Weak Response to Nazi Expansion

  • Long might issue blunt anti-Hitler statements, but take no concrete action—believing in “America First” economics and self-sufficiency.

  • No support for Czechoslovakia in 1938 or Poland in 1939.

  • He would likely oppose immigration from Nazi Germany, including Jewish refugees.

Counterfactual effect:

  • Holocaust refugees are blocked. Anti-Semitic sentiment grows in the U.S., with Long subtly or explicitly encouraging it.

  • Britain and France may feel even more isolated, possibly prompting earlier capitulation or different diplomatic arrangements with Germany.


III. WORLD WAR II TIMELINE CHANGES

5. Delayed U.S. Entry into WWII

  • If Japan attacks Pearl Harbor (or the Philippines), Long might retaliate—but hesitate to declare full-scale war.

  • He might negotiate a settlement with Japan rather than pursue total war.

  • In Europe, no D-Day, no U.S. troops in France. Britain and the USSR bear the full burden.

Counterfactual effect:

  • Germany holds Western Europe longer. Soviet losses multiply, but eventually crush Germany—claiming all of Eastern and Central Europe.

  • Postwar Europe may consist of only two powers: Stalin’s USSR and an exhausted British Empire.

  • A Cold War may still arise—but with America less globally engaged and no Marshall Plan.


IV. LONG-TERM CONSEQUENCES

6. No United Nations, No Global Order

  • Long’s focus on America-first policies likely prevents him from supporting postwar global institutions like:

    • The UN

    • The World Bank

    • Bretton Woods agreements

Result:

  • The U.S. does not become a global leader. It may become a hemispheric fortress, ceding global influence to Soviet expansion and decolonizing powers.

7. Post-Long Political Chaos

  • Long’s cult of personality might falter after a scandal, assassination, or economic collapse.

  • No stable successor—populist-authoritarianism gives way to political fragmentation.

  • Possibly a crisis of legitimacy by the mid-1940s—new political movements emerge, including far-left and far-right alternatives.


Summary Timeline of Key Divergences (1936–1945)

YearReal HistoryHuey Long Presidency
1936FDR wins second termHuey Long wins presidency
1937Recession hitsLong launches inflationary spending and loyalty campaigns
1938Hitler takes AustriaU.S. remains indifferent, focuses on domestic "enemies"
1939WWII begins in EuropeLong declares neutrality; criticizes "European monarchies"
1941Pearl HarborU.S. retaliates, but avoids full engagement
1942–45U.S. joins global warU.S. remains militarily limited; USSR dominates Europe
1945UN, IMF createdNo U.S.-led global order; Cold War is Soviet-British or multipolar

Bottom Line: A Weaker, More Isolated America

If Huey Long had become president in 1936:

  • Domestically: He would likely create a semi-authoritarian regime with populist rhetoric, centralized control, and economic redistribution.

  • Internationally: The U.S. would withdraw from leadership, empowering fascism early on and allowing Soviet domination later.

  • Long-term: The 20th century might end not with American hegemony—but with Soviet, Chinese, or fragmented multipolar rule, and an inward-turning United States coping with economic instability and moral fatigue.

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Provide a retelling of IT CANT HAPPEN HERE, but set at Grover’s Corners. [Our Town play]

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Absolutely. Here is a reimagining of It Can’t Happen Here, transplanted to Grover’s Corners, the fictional small town from Thornton Wilder’s Our Town. This version blends Sinclair Lewis’s political dystopia with Wilder’s minimalist, cosmic Americana—a chilling contrast between timeless small-town routines and creeping authoritarian collapse.


Title: "Here, Of All Places"

Genre: Political allegory / American tragedy
Setting: Grover’s Corners, New Hampshire, circa 1936–1942
Style: A blend of stage-style narration and novelistic realism. The Stage Manager still speaks—but now with a darker tone.

THEATRICAL TREATMENT IN 3 ACTS




ACT I: “The Weather’s Turned”

We open with The Stage Manager, just as in Our Town, narrating a day in Grover’s Corners: the milkman’s coming, the choir’s rehearsing, the high school’s in session. People read the Sentinel. Nothing much ever changes.

But there’s talk at the soda fountain—“Senator Windham” is running for president. A charismatic outsider. He says he’ll give folks a fair shake. "No more corruption. No more big-city elites. A return to real American values."

Local editor George Webb Jr., who took over from his father, is skeptical. He pens an editorial. It gets little traction. His high school classmate Emily, now a teacher, says he’s being cynical. People are hurting. Maybe Windham's what they need.


ACT II: “Things Move Fast in a Small Town”

Senator Windham is elected in a landslide.
In Grover’s Corners, people hang bunting. They sing hymns.

Soon, the Civic Renewal Program begins. The choir must submit its song selections for approval. The school adds "American Virtues" to the curriculum. Someone defaces the Congregational Church with a swastika-like symbol—but no one claims responsibility.

George Webb writes a column: “It’s Happening Here.”
The paper is shuttered the next week for violating the Truth in Media Statute.

A neighbor vanishes. The town constable says he "relocated for reevaluation."

Emily now teaches civic hymns to children, but she’s haunted. One student drew a picture of Windham with wings, another with a whip. Which is correct?


ACT III: “The Town Stays the Same”

We return to the cemetery—like in Our Town, we hear the dead speak.

But now, the dead say things like:

“I remember when we didn’t report our neighbors.”
“I miss reading on my porch.”
“I didn’t know what silence cost until it was all we had.”

George lives in exile across the state line, smuggling editorials to sympathetic ham radio operators. Emily, tormented by what she’s taught, walks into the woods and disappears.

The Stage Manager, for the first time, pauses. He removes his hat. He addresses us:

“Grover’s Corners always thought it was just a place to raise good kids and plant rhubarb.

But every place thinks that—until someone with a flag and a loud voice tells them they’re not good enough.

And then they listen.

And then they forget what good was.”


Final Image:

A young boy in the town square recites a pledge none of us recognize. The church bell rings, but the sound is mechanical now.
The townspeople stand quietly, perfectly still, as if waiting for something. Or for nothing.


Tagline:

"Even the quietest town has something it can lose."

Would you like a one-page treatment for producers or a mock poster to go with it?


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ONE-PAGE TV MINI  SERIES TREATMENT. 4 episodes


Title: Here, Of All Places
Format: Limited Series (4 Episodes)
Genre: Political Allegory / Historical Drama
Tone: Quietly harrowing, nostalgic yet foreboding — a blend of Our Town, The Crucible, and It Can’t Happen Here


Logline:

When a charismatic populist president comes to power in 1936, the sleepy New England village of Grover’s Corners watches the world change from a safe distance—or so they believe. As national politics seep into local life, the town’s gentle rhythms give way to subtle repression, suspicion, and the quiet erosion of truth.


Concept:

Here, Of All Places is a reimagining of Sinclair Lewis’s It Can’t Happen Here, told entirely from the perspective of Grover’s Corners, the archetypal American town from Thornton Wilder’s Our Town. The story is set between 1936 and 1942. It traces how fascism takes root not through violence, but through normalization—how good people, in a good place, gradually abandon truth in favor of comfort and control.

The show uses a hybrid narrative form: minimalist staging, direct-to-camera narration by a darkly reflective Stage Manager, and naturalistic drama. The contrast between timeless Americana and creeping totalitarianism is what makes the series chilling. This is not a story about battles or dictators—it’s about the small decisions that allow authoritarianism to grow.


Core Characters:

  • George Webb Jr. – Editor of the local paper, skeptical and principled, increasingly isolated as the town turns.

  • Emily (Gibbs) Webb – Once idealistic, now a schoolteacher caught between moral clarity and self-preservation.

  • The Stage Manager – Narrator and moral conscience. More disturbed with each episode.

  • Mayor Cartwright – A folksy leader who welcomes “renewal” without asking questions.

  • Senator Windham (offscreen presence) – The elected president, a populist demagogue whose policies seep into every town unnoticed.


Episode Guide:

  1. “The Weather’s Turned” – Windham’s rise and first policy shifts arrive quietly; George warns the town. He is ignored.

  2. “The Pledge” – Public rituals begin. Schoolchildren sing patriotic hymns. Neighbors are reported. One disappears.

  3. “The Quiet” – George is exiled. Emily begins to question her role. A creeping numbness settles on the town.

  4. “The Cemetery Again” – The dead speak, as in Our Town, but their words are filled with regret. Emily disappears. The Stage Manager closes the curtain with a warning for us all.


Why Now:

Here, Of All Places asks how much a free society is worth, and what it means to be a citizen when your town, your values, and your neighbors start to forget themselves. In an era of political polarization, media distortion, and creeping authoritarian sentiment, this series holds a mirror to the most dangerous myth in any democracy: “It can’t happen here.”


Created for: Netflix Original Limited Series
Target Audience: Viewers of The Handmaid’s Tale, The Plot Against America, and The Crucible
Writer/Showrunner: [Your Name]


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Discuss and compare IT CANT HAPPEN HERE if it had been written by Upton Sinclair intsead of Sinclair Lewis.    

Excellent provocation. If It Can’t Happen Here had been written by Upton Sinclair instead of Sinclair Lewis, we would have a completely different novel—in voice, in focus, and in ideology. The two Sinclairs shared progressive leanings, but they approached literature with utterly different aims and temperaments.

Let’s break down how the novel would have changed if Upton Sinclair had been its author.


1. Satire vs. Polemic

  • Sinclair Lewis wrote It Can’t Happen Here as a satirical warning, using irony, dry prose, and a detached narrator to show how fascism might creep into American life through populist rhetoric and institutional decay. He lampooned the American middle class, political boosters, and the rural press.

  • Upton Sinclair would’ve written a polemic and a crusade. His version would be angrier, more didactic, and more focused on economic injustice. It would be less about the absurdity of American institutions and more about class warfare, corporate greed, and mass deception.

Imagine the title line—“It can’t happen here”—in a Lewis novel, it’s ironic. In a Sinclair novel, it would be shouted by an ignorant factory owner just before being crushed by his own hired thugs.


2. Protagonist Shift: From Journalist to Worker

  • Lewis’s Doremus Jessup is a middle-aged newspaper editor—a liberal intellectual figure who initially underestimates the fascist threat.

  • Upton Sinclair would likely center a working-class hero—a union organizer, a sharecropper, or a factory hand. This character would not be blindsided by fascism; they would be crushed by it—or rise to lead the resistance.

Sinclair’s version would include a strike broken by Windrip’s stormtroopers, a child labor scene, and probably a corrupt judge who used to be a mining executive.


3. Fascism as Capitalist Conspiracy

  • Lewis portrayed fascism as a populist mutation of democracy, enabled by shallow patriotism, media cowardice, and mob psychology.

  • Sinclair would frame fascism as the natural endgame of unrestrained capitalism. Windrip would be a front for industrialists, bankers, and meatpacking tycoons. There would be no mystery about why fascism arose: it’s because the ruling class needed a new way to suppress rebellion.

It wouldn’t be what if fascism happened here? It would be: fascism has always been here—it just put on a new hat.


4. More Action, Less Ambiguity

  • Lewis’s novel spends a lot of time in boardrooms, newsrooms, and dinner parties, documenting slow declines and quiet capitulations.

  • Sinclair would give us raids, uprisings, underground newspapers, imprisonment, maybe even a martyrdom scene. He wouldn't leave us wondering about moral clarity—his characters would be noble or complicit, with speeches to match.

In Lewis, people ask, “How could this be happening?”
In Sinclair, they scream, “We warned you this was coming!”


5. Prose Style: Cold Irony vs. Fiery Preach

  • Lewis: Deadpan, reserved, cool satire.

  • Sinclair: Righteous, exclamatory, often overheated but emotionally direct.

Think of The Jungle—not subtle, but unforgettable.
Lewis makes you uneasy. Sinclair makes you furious.


Final Contrast: Two Versions of the Same Fear

ElementSinclair LewisUpton Sinclair
ToneIronical, restrainedUrgent, moralizing
HeroWhite-collar intellectualWorking-class radical
VillainDemagogue + mobCapitalist oligarchy
BlameCultural complacencyEconomic oppression
EndingGrim resistancePossible socialist awakening
GoalCautionary fableCall to action
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COMPARE UPTON SINCLAIR AND SINCLAIR LEWIS OPENING STYLE

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Absolutely. Let’s compare the actual opening paragraph of It Can’t Happen Here by Sinclair Lewis with a plausible reimagining of the same paragraph as it might have been written by Upton Sinclair.


🎩 Actual Opening – Sinclair Lewis (1935)

“The handsome dining-room of the Hotel Wessex, with its gilded plaster and crimson velvet chairs, was the private gathering-place for the Thirty-fourth Annual Meeting of the Daughters of Jeremiah.”

Immediately, Lewis is setting the stage for American provincialism. This is not a story that opens with the sound of marching boots—it opens with crimson velvet chairs and genteel complacency. He draws us in with irony, describing a world too polite and well-upholstered to believe anything terrible could happen. It’s a very Lewisian entrance: satirical, subtle, and surface-first.


🔥 Hypothetical Opening – Upton Sinclair

“The canning plant’s lunch whistle blew over the rooftops of Fort Beulah at 12:03, three minutes late again, and every worker on the floor knew that meant Old Man Murrow had taken another meeting with the Windrip men. Inside the breakroom, talk wasn’t about bread or baseball anymore. It was about uniforms. About loyalty oaths. About who disappeared last week. And it was happening here, not in Berlin or Moscow, but right here—in a town that once thought its worst enemy was the flu.”

This opening channels Sinclair’s trademarks:

  • Working-class perspective from the first sentence.

  • Economic anxiety and political pressure baked into the setting.

  • No irony—just urgency.

  • A sense of historical gravity with a local, ordinary frame.

This version doesn’t ease you in—it shoves you into the machinery of power and fear. There’s no velvet. No Daughters of Jeremiah. Only men missing and whispers in the lunchroom.


✒️ Key Differences

Element Sinclair Lewis Upton Sinclair
Setting Hotel dining room (bourgeois formality) Factory lunchroom (working-class realism)
Tone Ironic, observational Urgent, incensed
Focus Surface details of a complacent elite Economic power, fear, disappearance
Theme Introduced Absurdity of civic rituals Corruption of labor and coercive power
Voice Cool, detached Moral, immediate, rhetorical

Would you like the next paragraph too—say, where the Windrip movement is introduced more explicitly?